This is the original idea.
- This is Felix’s idea!
- in a suit gets out and walks in.
- Shot of a green table which tilts up where we see the rest of the poker table and the people around it
- Close up shot of the man in the suit (rich man) dropping chips on the table from his hand repeatedly
- Close up of his eyes that look up from his cards and across the table
- Mid shot of the man he is looking at who catches his eyes and quickly looks away
- The camera would then reverse back to the rich man who would look up to the corner opf the room
- Shot from behind of man in a control room, he would say 'begin'
- Side profile shot of the rich man saying stick
- Shot of his arm pushing chips into the middle
- Head Shot of the man closest to him clockwise saying 'stick' (man 1)
- Head Shot of the next man saying 'Twist' (Man 2)
- Head shot of the rich man staring at him
- Table level shot of the rich man taking a card off the top of the pile and passing it to man 2
- Over the shoulder of man 1 shot focusing on man 3 who says stick and slides his chips into the middle
- Shot of man 2 who says 'twist' again. The camera stays on him as he is passed another card where he then looks at them for a second before looking up and saying 'bust'
- Same shot but now on the rich man who looks up at the camera again
- Shot from behind the person sat at the control desk who then says 'send them in'
- Close up of rich man's hand reaching under the table
- Loud buzz and red light and a heavy door is opened a man comes in and drags off the man who went bust
- Side shot of rich man putting cards on the table
- Over head of cards as he says "19'
- shot of man 1 putting cards down and says '19
- same for third man
- Over head of the rich man dealing out another round of cards
- Rich man looks up at camera
- Head shot of man 3 gulping
- Rich man looks back forward and says 'stick'
- Cut to man 1 looking at cards then saying 'twist' and being handed another
- Very short shot of man three saying 'Stick'
- Move back very fast to man 1 saying 'twist again' then looking at his cards and then looks up at the rich man
- Shot of rich man returning the eye contact
- Shot of man 1 saying 'twist' again whilst maintaining the eye contact
- Shot of man 1s hands as he says stick and lays hes cards on the table (they add up to 21)
- Shot of man 3s hands putting his cards down
- Shot of the rich man's face
- Shot of rich man's hands as he puts his cards down on the table (they add up to 20)
- He looks up into the corner
- Same shot of the control room and the person says 'let him out'
- Rich man presses the same point under the table
- Shot of the guard walking back in
- Shot of man 1 being dragged out of his chair
- Shot from outside of a door (bunker looking) the door opens and man 1 is dropped outside
- Shot of the sun
- Ecu of his eyes squinting
- Fully body shot of him laughing on the ground
- END
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The new version is -
- Shot of the car driving along a road (1.5)
- Car pulling up at hurtwood house, Boss gets out (5)
- Tilt up to show ther poker table with four people around it (2.5)
- Close up of all the people holding cards looking tired, dirty and nervous (4)
- Shot of the Boss in a control room from behind (1s)
- Side shot of him saying 'begin' (1.5)
- Man 1 picks up cards (2)
- Over head shot of him laying five cards out on the table (7)
- Shot of man 2 pushing in a few chips (1)
- Shots of all of them pushing in the same amount
- Shot from the side of the table - silence, then one man says 'stick' all the others say it very quickly after him
- Shot of the last two cards being turned over
- Shot of the last man figiting with his last two chips before he then slides them in
- Cards are put down - various shots of each hand
- Shot of the last guy with no chips lefty putting down his hand
- Shot of the second guy reaching nacross and grabbing all the chips in the middle quickly
- last man reqching trying to get some back shouting ' no, NO!'
- Guard comes out of the dark and drags him back
- Shot of the rich man saying 'play
- First guy slides in one chip
- Long shot of the second guy looking at his cards and chips and other people then says 'all in'
- hands sliding all his chips in.
- 2nd Man looks at his cards and breaks into hysterical happiness gathering the chips
- Gaurd comes out the dark and grabs the man who won
- Shot from outside of a door opening and man two is thrown out
- Fully body shot of him laughing on the ground
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